श्री मुकुंद आनंद ढाके यांनी आई, प्रमिला आनंद ढाके यांच्या स्मृतिप्रीत्यर्थ पाठविलेली कविता
जगी माऊली सारखे कोण आहे ।
जिचे जन्मजन्मांतरी ऋण आहे।।
असे ऋण हे की जया व्याज नाही।
ऋणाविन त्या जीवना साज नाही ।।
जिने सोसल्या यातना कोटी कोटी ।
तुला जन्म लाभे तिच्या पुण्य पोटी।।
जिच्या यातनाचे जगी मोल नाही ।
तिच्या सारखा लाघवी बोल नाही।।
जिने लाविला लेकरांना लळा या।
तिच्या दैवी लेखी उन्हाळी झळा या ।।
जिच्या पूजनाला जगी फूल नाही ।
अशा देवतेचे जगी नाव आई।।
मुकुंद ढाके, बहारीन
Aai Kavita is great! Mr. Mukund is at hhis soft hearted sentimental best. What a poem! I have no words to appreciate it. Mr. Mukund keep that flame on.
Lovely, lovely,lovely.
Satish
karnikbl4@aol.com
nice
khup chan aahae, aawadali mala,
Thank you……..
wow..how sweet poem
श्री मुकुंद आनंद ढाके यांनी आई, प्रमिला आनंद ढाके यांच्या स्मृतिप्रीत्यर्थ पाठविलेली कविता
जगी माऊली सारखे कोण आहे ।
जिचे जन्मजन्मांतरी ऋण आहे।।
असे ऋण हे की जया व्याज नाही।
ऋणाविन त्या जीवना साज नाही ।।
जिने सोसल्या यातना कोटी कोटी ।
तुला जन्म लाभे तिच्या पुण्य पोटी।।
जिच्या यातनाचे जगी मोल नाही ।
तिच्या सारखा लाघवी बोल नाही।।
जिने लाविला लेकरांना लळा या।
तिच्या दैवी लेखी उन्हाळी झळा या ।।
जिच्या पूजनाला जगी फूल नाही ।
अशा देवतेचे जगी नाव आई।।
pharach chan mi ek student aahe jo baher gavi rahato. Mala hi
kavita vachlynantar eyes madhe ashru aale kharch aai vina aayusha bekar aahe. aai mi tula roj miss karto.
******************** All the best to you.
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mazi aai mala khup aavadte. ti pan ashich aahe. mala lagnanantar suddha tich pratyek goshtit tichich aathvan yete. asa divas nahi ki aai tuzi aathvan nahi.
Mukundji, Ashya parmochya bhavnanchi aani Aai varil kavita aawadnar nahi ka kunala? Hya bhavna jari mani thevlya tari thode far runaatun mukt zhalyasarkhe vatate bagha
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Mukund ji, Nava pramanech agadi Krishna chya basri tiil sur kanavar padave tashi tumchi kavita agadi Manat Sarrrrrr kan ghar karun geli !!! Aaani pratek mulvar aai che kiti upkaar aastat hyachi jaan devun geli.
Khupach Sunder ! Apratim hya shabdahun hi Apratim !!!
Suresh Shinde
suresh.shinde@gmail.com
Dear Mukund,
Poem words like from heart. You are showing universal truth in few words.
Keep it up!!!
Best Regards,
Jagdish
Its very touching words regarding mother and its reality.
APP
“अशा देवतेचे जगी नाव आई।।
khup chan kavita aahe.
This poem is great ! No words can ever describe the importance and greatness of mother. This poem left tears in my eyes !
It is very nice Mr Mukund.
Regards,
Sarika
DEAR MUKHUD BHAU,
KHUP CHAN KAVITA. aaila khari shradhanjlai hou shakte. mala pan aai nahi. mi mazya aaila khup miss karto. mala tichi khup aathvan yete.
pan khupch chan kavita. mala aai ya vishayavar 1-2 year madhe poet book kadhayche aahe. tyamdhe mi hi kavita nakki ghein.
Datta Jadhav
Khup chan kavita ahe…..mala hi kavita vachatana “Ye to sachh he ki Bhagavan hai………” he gane athawale…..Lovely
Thanks,
Sarika Bankar
Thank you Sarika
kavita khup shabdpradhan ani bhavnik ahe.
Great poem, its universal truth
Khupch chan
apratim
bolalala shabdach nahit
Mukund,
mala tumachi kavita aavadli…khrach khoop sahal, saral and arthpoorna kavita aahe..mazyahi tarfe tumchya aaila shradhanjali…
Dear Mukund,
Tumachi kavita manala khupach bhavanari ahe. Vachun man bharun ale.
Anek kabad kashta karun, kwachit prasangi upashi poti rahun aplya mulanche sangopan karanari ani mulanche bhavishya ghadvinarya tya matela salam.
Shevatache donach shabda
SWAMI TINHI JAGACHA AAI VINA BHIKARI.
Hello Mukund
Good 1 and Gr8
Keep it rolling
Hi Mr Mukund,
Awesome!!! khupach chan lihile ahe tumhi. wachun radaila ale!! Mala aai ahe pann tari tumhi lihile vachun mala radaila ale..apratim..In future jarr tumhi ase kahi tari lihile tarr me naki nakki vachin ani reply dekhil karin..All the Best for ur Future
Mrs Pallavi.
HI Mukund,
its very nice ………
अतिशय हृदयस्पर्शी कविता
कोणाच्याही डोळ्यात पाणी येइल….
Hi,
Kavita bhavna purna ani reality sangnari ahe.
Shradhanjali to aai.
Best Regards,
Parag
khupach chan ,,,,,,,,,,,,,
mast kavita ahe mukund..
mala mazya aaichi athavan ali. manasala aplya palakanchi kimmat nasatana samajate. god bless you.
lihit raha ..
aai…….
mazi pan aai aahe ti ya jagat nahi tari suddha mazya zaval aahe tila mi kadhich visru shaknar nahi gharamadhe mich ladka hoto 2 varsh zhali ti mala sodun devaghari geli aaichi khup aathvan yete pan kai karu photo rudhayala laun radat basto pudhacha janmathi mi tuzhach mulga honar
mukund sir tumchi kavita rudhayala sparsh karun……………
mukund dhake tumhi far chhan kavita lihili ahe…good job…beautiful poem…good luck!
Aaj vayachya sathavya varshihi ek hi divas asa jat nahi ki aath varshapurvi gelelya aaichi aathvan ali nahi,karan aayushyachi pahili pannas varshe jichya sahavasat geli ti mazi aai mhanaje mukundjini kavyat varnan keleli murtimant mazich aai hoti.
Mukund ji tumhala itke compliments milale yavarunach samjun yete ki kavita kiti sundar ahe te… ekdam apratim kavita ahe… rhudayatun nighalele shabd vachayla milale aaj… ThankU so much..! Aai mhanu mi koni ya sundar ganyasarkhich hi kavita aai che aplya jivanatle mahatva janavun dete …
Thank U so much.!
Dear Manish,
Tumhi varnan kelela pratek shabda hridaysparshi aahe,ya kavite mule aai chi atavan jagi zali.
Sagar
very very good i like this
It is very nice Mr Mukund.
Thanks
Regards,
Rahul
It is very nice
Good poem..
Hello Mr.Mukund,
Khupcha manala bhavli tumchi kavita.Man bharun aalech pan aai che kasth dolyasmaor ale. aapan kharokharch khup chan lihile ahe. prasangi apan aai lach kahihi bolun gheto pan ti aai aste maaf karte lagech sagle aathwale.
aaple khup aabhar .
Good Luck for future.
regards,
Mrs Sheetal Girase
Real feelings you wrote in the poem. agdi saglyana – pratyekalach bhavnari aahe.
Mr. Mukuand,
Tumhi khup chan kavita lihali aahe.
Kharya arthane tumhi tumachya aaila shradhan jali vahili aahe.
Mala pan aai nahi ,pan tiche sanskar aani aathavni hya satat aaplya barobar asatat.
Regards,
Ketki
mazhe baba 2006 la gele ani aai jaun aata 15 april la ek year honar aahe aaple munu gele ki kay hote he mag kalte
Dear Mukund,
Few words and large meaning bythrough this poem. Excellent Mukund.
Regards,
Viresh
Dear Mukund,
Excellent!!! poem….
Regards
Ashok Patil
Dear Mukund,
The poem is so nice & touching to heart. While reading this poem my mother
really stands in front of me & also I can really realise her past.
Ecxellent , marvellous & fabulous poem.
Keep it up mukund.
Regards,
Vinay
Thanks to Esakal to give us opportunity to experess ourself to the world.
Many Thank to all readers..
really mala gahivarun ale i have no words . me stabdha jhalo. dolayat tachkan pani ale thanks shrikant deo mob:9440443177
dear Mukund,
Plz,, He Carefully wach aani reply de….
Tuze aaiwar asnare he prem atishay chhan aahe,,
Tuzya kalpana itkya drudh aahe ki tu aajhi tichyawar tewdhech prem kar,’
jevdhe tu tuzya shadat karat aahe..
Mala aaiwar khupach jasti prem aahe.
Mi Mazya Mamimadhe mazya aaiche chitra baghato…
Mi tila suddha aai ya nawanech hak marto….Pan jagala he manya nahi…
Mi kay karu…Tuzy shabdat aani chhan ashya kavitet te mala mazya mail war sang…
Tuza aaiwar Prem karnara Mitra…Visru nakos mala..
Tuze aabhar kase manave tya sathi mazya kade shabdach nahi re..
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Maze nukatech lagna zale ahe….he kavita vachali ani aaichi khoop khoop athavan ali …eetaki ki dole panyane bharale….thanks!!!
Excellent poem!!!! I love it!!
khoop chhan aahe kavita
Aai la upmaa nahi.
Parmeshwarachi daya ki aplyala aai tyane dili.
Nice Poem..i like it..Apratim…chan..AAi che kasht aathwale ani mazy kartav..Thanks
Namskar,
Aapan AAi var keleli kavita pharch chhan aahe. Dole panyani bharun aale. AAichi khup aathavan aali. Apanas Ganesh Chathurthichya Hardik Shubhechha.
khpch bhauk kavita
swami thinhi jagacha aai vina bhikhri hi kavita send kara pls.
mukund sir tumi lihileli kavita vachtana mazya dolat pani aale. mazi aai mazya pasun khup dur rahte . mala ase vatle ki me tichya kushit zople aahe .& ti mazya pashi aahe .kavita pharch sunder aahe.
to, mukund dhake
GOOD AFTERNOON SIR,
TUMHI LIHILELI AAI KAVITA AMHALA KHUPACH AWADLI, TYATLA EK- EK SHABD AAI KASHI ASTE YACHI ATHAVAN KARUN DETO.
aiche gunagan karun lihaleli kavita far chan ahe . kathin hrudayachy lekrachi dole ugadawasarkhi kavita aahe.mi tar mazy aaila devasarkhe pahatoe .ashech kavita lihatraha .dhanyvad .
deepak
japan tokyo
chan kavita ahe ase watate ki wachatach rahawe. sunder apratim.
thanks
kharach khup chhan kavit aahe
Its a HERT TOUCH POEM really. very nice.
I love you, my wonderful mother;
You’re a heaven-sent blessing to me.
What “Mother” Means
“Mother” is such a simple word,
But to me there’s meaning seldom heard.
For everything I am today,
My mother’s love showed me the way.
I’ll love my mother all my days,
For enriching my life in so many ways.
She set me straight and then set me free,
And that’s what the word “mother” means to me.
Thanks for being a wonderful mother, Mom
In Jesus’ name we pray; Amen.
Dear Mukund,
Mala tumchi kavia far aawadali, aapan itaki sundar aaichi kavita keli ki mala maz man bharun aale.
Thanks
Santosh Sonawane
yekdam chan mala khup aawadli very nice & thank you again
khup ch hruday sprshi kavita ahe .
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khup chaan mukundji… cn i hv more marathi poems on aai…???? plzzzz mail me
Aai var kiti hi lihale tari kami ahe, Shabt kami padatat.
very nice poeam.tuch my hard
MAJHI AAI ME LAHAN ASTANACH SODOUN GELI HI KAVITA WACHLYANANTER DOLYATOUN PANI AVTARLE.KHARACH FAR SUNDER.THANKS
khup chan kavita ahe.
Khupch Chan Ahe Kavita…………
Khup chan kavita ahe…
aai var kavita lihanya etake aapan mothe nahi
tari pan mr. mukund aai baddal je lihale te mala
khup aawadale
thank u
kharach aai mhanage aai asate, mazi aai mala khup aavadhate mala sath janmat mala hich aai pahige…………….
Khoop chhan aahe kavita , jagi aai la upmaa nahi
DEAR , mukund bhau mala tumchi kavita far avadli me tumcha abhari ahe
khup sunder ahe tumchi kavita . mazyakade shabdhch nahe.
loveli
khup chhan ata type karayala pan bot kaptat parat avshya lihin
kavita khup chhan aahe .
aai chi jaga kunicha gheu shakat nahi
Reply
Aai kavita farach arthpurn aahe.kharach aaila pujayala fule kami padtil.
Aai kavita khoopch Chan aahe.aai sarkhe daivat kotech milnar nahi.jagat sarvat motepan aaimadhe aahe.
ANANTA KADAM-KHUPCH CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ashi Kavita Aai varati ajuntari Kudhaly Kavine keli nhavati ti Mukund Sahebani Keli. Aani je Lok Aai var Prem Kartat Tech Pratikriya detat.
aai sathi kitihi bolal tari kami aahe. aai ya don shabda madhe akhand wishwa aahe.
“swami tinhi jagacha
Aai vina bhikhari”
swami tinhi jagacha aai vina bhikari
just beautiful………
aai sathi sabdh nahi
आई हा शब्द नाही हे प्रेम आहे जगात यायचे असेल तर आपल्याला आई पाहिजे
ज्यांना आई नाही आपण सगळ्यांनी त्यांनट प्रेम देऊ
मला पण आईचे प्रेम मिळाले नाही
far chan kavita ahe. ‘Aai sarkhe daivat jagi koni nahi’
ai var khup prem ahe mazz,kavita vachalyavar bhas hoto ki mich te full ahe. kharach khup chan kavita ahe mala khup avadali.
Great !!! The universal truth , feelings about mother….described in the exact words…
1 numberrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
e mukund tujya mule doyal pani ale haa………….
Khartar aaiche prem mala khup kami milale , aaichi maya kay asate he me khup samajato jivanat baki kahi nasel tari chalel pan aai pratekala havich aai vina jaganyat arthach shillak rahat nahi kavita vachun kanth bharun aala mitrano aaplya aaila kadhich visaru naka.
Khup chan kavita aahe……..
khupch chhan agdi hrudayala sparshun janari
Khup chaan siR
खरचं माझी आई ची आठवण आली
Dear,Mukaund tumhi khup chan kavita lehali ahe.
Dear,mukaund,tumhi khup chan kavita lehli ahe
hi…..
mukundji ,
I am avinash your poem is heartly touchable,
I like it….
I will like to call you and share my thaught with you.
khup chan ani aflatun ridayala chunari kavita ahe
mala hi tumachi kavita khupch Aavadali tumchya mule mala mazya Aaiche mahatav samajale
thank you mukudaji thank you so much
dear sir.. kharch aai badal lihil tevad kami ch ahe …apali aai jevha apalya javal aste tevha apalyala aai ch prem kalat nahi pan jevha apan apalya aai pasun dur jato ..baher chya jagat vavrayla lagto thevhach kalat aai ch khar prem…. mi aaj aai pasun dur ahe ani atta mala mazya aai chi khup athavan yet ahe .aai chya premachi …..mi aai sathi khup radat ahe ……….i love my sweet mom …
very nice
mummy nahi fakt aai
khupch channnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Too Good
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Aai baddal kitihi bol tari kamich pan tumchi kavita speechless aahe..so good..khupch chhaan.
Mi pahilyandach ashi aai varun lihileli kavita vachali yevadhi mala aavadhali ki majhyakade shabdach nahit.THANKS for you. AAi poem.
Parat asha kavita lihavyas hich majhi apeksha.
For agains thanks.
Amhi 3 bhau ahot.amhi Aaivar khup prem karato.dev karo amche Aaivarche prem asech abadhit raho……I LOVE YOU …Aai
(Tumhi lihileli Aaivarun kavita khupach avadhali.)
Thanks”dhakesaheb !!
mukundji kay lihu aaibaddal .jagatil sagale shabd kami padatil tichya stutisathi.mala aai nahi pan tichi kshanakshanala khup athavan yete … tumchya kavitene agadi dolyat pani all.sagal lahanpan athaval.as vatat ugach mothi zale.lahan aste tar javal maya karnari aai asti…..aai miss u so much…kuthe ahes tu… tuzi manisha…
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Aai mala tujhi khup Aathvan Yete…
Dewa Tu Ase Konala ase divas deu nkos…
कविता खुपच सुंदर केली आहे खरोखरच आज आईला न्याय देण्याचे काम आपण केले त्याबध्दल अभारी आहोत.
Salami Tumala aani tumchya aaila tine Tumala jalm dila thanks
Dear Mukuknd, Tumachya kavitet tumachya aai baddalchya divya bhavana spasht spasht disun yetayet. Khuuuuup chhan! Khara tar ‘aayi’ ha ek ‘mahamantrach’ aahe, nahi ka?
pratek lokani aai baddal do vaky tar lihave i love you mom
1dam bhari best
mazi aai
its really touch my heart!!
thanks a lot
I love my mom…..
Khup Chan Aahae, I Love Aai.
aai wina jaga asa kon ahe wichare mana tuchi shodhun pahe
Dev Dagdat nai.
Aai chi seva tyatch dev.
Deva amala geun chal pan ameche aai la jau de..
Very good Best
mala hi kavita phar aavdli
I like this poet
very nice poeam.tuch my hard
Kharch Aai ha shabd ucchartana kiti chan vatat . Aai ya shabdacha arth mhanje aa – mhanje aatama
Aani i- mhanje ishawar
I muuuuuu Aai lv u so much
Khp mst really heart touching lines..
aai ya shabdala antach nahi
Whaa kya bat .khup sunder swami tinahi jagacha Aai vina bhikari
Khup Chan lihilat tumhi.Aai baddal.
Mother is the biggest gift of god to all human being Believe it or not she is the real queen she protect her child and not mean Love u a lo
I love you Aai
Apratim kavita aahe……ashya lekhakala lakh-lakh dhanyawad….
Those is piat is a teribal
अप्रतिम. ………अतिशय सुंदर आणि अर्थपूर्ण आहे.
मला आई नाही….
एक मूलगी म्हणून जगण ..
आणि ते पण आई विना……….
अशक्य…
कविता अतिशय सुंदर आहे…
mla sasuchi maya aai sarchich aste yavaril kahi kavita asen tar share kara nakki…
अतिशय छान!
नेमक्या शब्दांत आईची महती गाईलेली आहे.
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